Would something like this work?

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Would something like this work?

Unread postby that one guy » February 23rd, 2009, 7:08 pm

OK, I started a Fate/Stay Night fan-fic a few months ago, and I just looked it over again. I kind of like what's going on, and I'd love for other people to read it, but it has a few major problems with it. First off, it kinda messes up everything. Mainly, Shirou is completely different, and Kotomine is a little different as well. Second, it's all dialogue based. Basically, I'm really lazy and can't be arsed to describe what happens. The story is still followable, as far as I can tell at least, so it might not be much more than a stylistic choice, but would it be readable like that? And Third, me being an unoriginal bastard, it features a few cameos from other Type-Moon works...well, not so much cameos as convenient plot devices. It might just be my inner self consciousness, but would you guys want to read something like that?
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Unread postby KratosIrving » February 23rd, 2009, 7:41 pm

I'll always read something just to find out what it is. Anyhow, as with most FF's there will be many things different from the original stories/situations. There's quite a few out there with Shirou being quite different (including mine) and throwing in cameos from the other T-M works.

My point is this: Go ahead and post it. The hardest thing for me to do when I first started my fic was to get the nerve to actually post it. Even if other people find it to be bad, it's nothing to worry about; the hardest critic anyhow will always be yourself, so you'll find every possible negative thing within it. As long as you feel that you did a good enough job on your work, that's all that matters, in my opinion.
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Unread postby that one guy » February 23rd, 2009, 7:43 pm

Aright...you've got a point. I just can't really work myself up to post it...but I guess I will. Thanks for the advice.
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Unread postby Kuuya/Fabre » March 7th, 2009, 2:04 am

Just go with it. I really like reading your FF. Just relax. ^_^
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