Balcerzak wrote:A few minor textual notes, seen on a blaze-through skimming.
Line: Mikan-"Nutition is hard, huh?"
Problem: typo "Nutrition"
Line: Kuu-"Cat's and dogs are pretty straightforward. That's why Kotarou-chan calls Nadeshiko-san "mom" and is with her all the time."
Problem: consider single quotes "calls Nadeshiko-san _'_mom_'_ and is with her"
Line: Risa-"Engaged couple... We'll change from cohabiters to engaged couple."
Problem: missing word. "from cohabiters to _an_ engaged couple."
Line: The dogs won't let go of us ever since we came through the door.
Problem: mixed tenses. Try "The dogs _haven't_ let go"
Line: The tightness and the sensation of her pussy is one of the best I've experienced
Problem: compound subject agreement. "The tightness and sensation of her pussy _are among_ the best I've experienced."
Error: Happened during the new clothes ceremony, right after the drumroll and right before "Meido-san fuku!"
I have been unable to reproduce this error as of yet.
Problem was NOT fatal, gameplay proceeded normally after clicking OK.
I had to stop at this point because it was hella late, and trying to replicate the problem was frustrating and getting nowhere.
Nestor wrote:Got the same error.
Superflonic wrote:Nestor wrote:Got the same error.
I guess that's the same as the 'weird error' I got.
It doesn't show up twice, doesn't interrupt anything, just press OK once (or more, in my case) and you can go on.
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