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Unread postby gunblade » January 9th, 2009, 8:58 pm

I started a small translation on a cg set a while back.
Armed with my dictionaries, atlas and my 2 years of study (Optional module for university/college) I figured how hard can it be?
I mean it's pretty much "yes!", "ahhh!" and "I want your cock!!!"
*ahem*
Well, yes it would seem I have bit more to do than that. My Japanese grammar isn't too bad though a little on the rusty side (The 2 years of study was over a year ago), I know all hiragana, katakana and some basic kanji, the one's I don't know I atlas it or online dictionaries.
Well it seems to be going well enough but question, would I be able to garner help from this thread and ask questions on what I feel to be the most dubious translated sections?
I don't think there were too many but I've only translated about half and currently in the process of laboriously and carefully editting out the japanese and inserting the english.
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Unread postby LoSs » January 9th, 2009, 9:23 pm

I don't think this is good idea. You can train yourself by reading manga with furigana, but translating something else would be...
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Unread postby Blue Gunner » January 10th, 2009, 8:50 am

If you have something to ask, then ask it. There was another thread where someone asked something similar, and he got responses, so there shouldn't be an issue. Even if you don't get a response, it can't hurt to ask.
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Unread postby gunblade » January 22nd, 2009, 5:47 am

Disclaimer: The following text contains material of a sexual nature and crude language and is not intended for minors or the easily offended.

Yeah...
As if you'd even be on this forum if you cared.
Anyways...

One scene I'm really not sure on how to translate.

おうっ。。。そんなに喉の奥でしごいたらすぐにいってしまうじゃ。。。ないか。。。!

うお!。。。おっ。。。キシキシに締め付けてきやかる

How I roughly translated it as was:

oouu... your right into her throat and with her method you already near your end...!?

uuooh...! ooh kuu... all that noise is tightening it further.

Cheesy? Why yes. Though I was gonna try and naturalise it when inserting the text. Well the first line anyways, though this one was practically guess work.
I'm thinking the second line was a response to the first guy.

Next up. A few suggestions are needed for:

商品: Commodity

Now we are using this in terms of describing the women i.e. describing her as an object, something for sale.
Now unless this is slang for prostitute, i.e. "whore", which i don't think it is. Should i just leave it as commodity to keep the meaning of object?

口便器: mouth toilet

Well we all know what this means but "mouth toilet" isn;'t exactly something someone would say in english and thus doesn't work in literal translation.
I used "dirty mouth" but then it doesn't convey the same meaning as mouth used for the dumping of cum... :roll:
suggestions anyone?

That is all, for now :wink:
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Unread postby TakaJun » January 24th, 2009, 11:01 am

おうっ。。。そんなに喉の奥でしごいたらすぐにいってしまうじゃ。。。ないか。。。!
Oh... I'm gonna come right away if you jerk me using the back of your throat like that...!

うお!。。。おっ。。。キシキシに締め付けてきやかる
Whoa! Oh... It's really tight

商品
Merchandise, product, whatever

口便器
Mouth toilet. Blowjob machine.
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Unread postby Atriel » January 24th, 2009, 11:28 pm

Am i the only one laughing here? :lol:
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Unread postby gunblade » January 25th, 2009, 12:42 am

If you weren't laughing you'd be a cold emotionless machine.
It probably looks better when it's actually text over cg :roll:



wouldn't hedge any bets though >_>


Oh and thanks for the trans taka ^^
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Unread postby Kid-Wolf » January 25th, 2009, 2:28 am

After readon what TakaJun did there I had to laugh. It looks like a nice flowing transaltion there. So nice job as always.
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Unread postby gunblade » April 13th, 2009, 12:38 am

got a few more that needs help translating...

Long time between posts? "Another wealth of lines i can't translate?" "why bother?" I hear you ask (or not as it maybe...)

Just to clarify again, this is nothing but a pet project that I just got the idea of doing. Wanted in English and thought "why not?", no one has asked for it, and will most likely never be translated. Very few doujins get translated, even less so a CG set. I'll post it up once it's finished (not here obvy) but mainly it's for my own amusement. I can translate about 80%-90% by myself I think, the other 10%, a couple of words just confuse the entire sentence for me unfortunately.

anyways...

いいバニがはいったって、上じゃ評判なんだぜ

まだ全然便い込んでねえ感じだぜ

あんま動くなよ噛み付いたら承知しねぇぞ

咥えながら喋らせるのもありだな

すげえ吸い付きやがて... 喉奥で亀頭が嚥下されそうになるのって癖になるな

treat each line seperately, they are part of different scenes. Thanks for any help ^^
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Unread postby nobaka » April 13th, 2009, 6:07 am

And what CG set is this?
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Unread postby gunblade » April 13th, 2009, 4:21 pm

Circle: Vogue
Title: The Milky White Bunny hunt.
You can find it on dlsite.
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