Utawarerumono Typo/Grammar Thread [v1.1]

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Unread postby Arrowmaster » March 17th, 2008, 11:10 pm

Encyclopedia 21, after the flashback of the contract with Eruruw.

Hakuoro: What has done? (with .... over done)

Not quite sure what this should be, maybe "What have I done?" or "What has happened?"
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Unread postby Ryuusoul » March 24th, 2008, 7:17 am

All the above posts taken into account. Not every correction was accepted, but all your effort was appreciated.

Thundercloudl wrote:After battle 5 where you got aruruw
http://skynet.sprintslash.net/rayromano ... untain.jpg
"She is an herbalist after all."
'hero' is misspelled as 'herbalist'.


Thundercloud, am I missing something here? I don't get this correction at all.

Edit: Wait... wait... that was a meme, wasn't it...
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Unread postby yuki_tsumotteru » July 4th, 2008, 2:01 am

* Encyclopedia 10 page, Tuskur entry:
Stabbed by Nuwangi's subordinate while she
(linebreak and no text)
village to Hakuoro before she passes away.

-- Text between the two lines appears to be missing.

* After the death of Teoro:
Hakuoro: ... Got it. You can rest now, An-chan.
-- Mistake; Hakuoro would have said Oyaji-san.


* The first morning after Kamyu drinks a lot of water:
Kamyu: O... Onee-san...
-- She says Onee-sama in every other instance...

* Talking to Derihourai about Karura:
That' can't be true... gah!?
-- random apostrophe. That can't be true

* During the battle in the river:
Normally, the water would have flown over the riverbanks.
-- Probably should have been flowed, though the way it is is right if the water WAS flying over the banks.

* After meeting Genjimaru the first time:
Hakuoro: (That is a man of Evenkurga...)
-- grammatical correctness; (That man is an Evankurga), (of the Evenkurga), or similar

* First talk with Sakuya and Kuuya:
Hakuoro: But Genjimaru is Evenkurga.
-- is an Evenkurga, etc... ?

* Battlefield event where the Av Kamiw are revealed:
Kanhordari: I, Konhardari-sama...
-- self-explanatory... Kanhordari-sama
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Unread postby yuki_tsumotteru » July 7th, 2008, 5:30 pm

Also in v. 1.1; Hakuoro is at level 22.

After the return of the baby:
* Urtoriy: Thank you, Hakuoro-sama. If I had not given him back, I would have regretted it for the rest of my life.
* Urtoriy: Give him back!! Give me back my Fumiruir!!
-- They're talking about Fumiruir, so the sex is incorrect; it should read her in both cases.
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Unread postby yuki_tsumotteru » July 23rd, 2008, 6:47 pm

Final batch of v. 1.1 corrections!

* Talking with Genjimaru and Sakura when you first find out
her leg tendons were cut
:
Sakuya
No, I---I told him too!
-- should be to in this context - she told him to do it.

* Throne room before fist battle with Genjimaru; I was at level 22:
Oryankur rises weakly from his bed.
-- Should there be a The at the beginning of the sentence?

Encyclopedia 19:
Consistency issues; Uu's entry is written in the past tense, but Yaa and Taa's are in the present tense. Suggested corrections in parentheses.

[Yaap] Nicknamed Yaa. Old man always with Uu and Taa.
Handled logistics, but after Kenashkourpe is (was)
defeated, goes (went) back to Yamayura
with Teoro and the others, but is (was) killed in Kucca
Kecca's sudden attack.

[Taana-kun] Nicknamed Taa. A boy always with Uu and Yaa.
Hesitated when he spoke. Handled logistics.
After Kenashkourpe is (was) defeated, goes [went] back
to Yamaura with Teoro and the others. Killed in Kucca Kecca's sudden attack

Before leaving for On Riyaak:
She takes several strands of hair and wraps it around my pinky.
-- The hair is plural, so she wraps them around his pinky.

Some missing Encyclopedia lines:

Encyclopedia 21:
[Karurawaturei]
Karura's true name, but she has long since
(line with no text)
-- this is also in Encyclopedia 22

[Flames ]
-- extra space after closing bracket

Omake room:
Archer sprite's name is Programmer Ookawamasato - looks like two names... (unless this was intentional)
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Unread postby Oass » September 26th, 2008, 1:58 pm

After Derihourai comes to thank Hakuoro for his help in the rebellion:

Karura: Pride over compassion, no, compassion wasn't even considered. The slighted houses rose up against this treatement.

A small correction on the 'treatement' part. It should be 'treatment'.
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Re: Utawarerumono Typo/Grammar Thread [v1.1]

Unread postby sevalle » September 16th, 2009, 7:02 am

Urtoriy's spells are labelled as "Wind" and "Water". Since the four elements do not include "Water", I have a nagging suspicion that "Water" is supposed to be "Lightning"...?
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Re: Utawarerumono Typo/Grammar Thread [v1.1]

Unread postby Peorth » November 4th, 2009, 7:29 am

sevalle wrote:Urtoriy's spells are labelled as "Wind" and "Water". Since the four elements do not include "Water", I have a nagging suspicion that "Water" is supposed to be "Lightning"...?

Err...Fire, water...wind...earth ? o.O




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Re: Utawarerumono Typo/Grammar Thread [v1.1]

Unread postby Kai » August 6th, 2011, 10:23 am

erm... i'm not confident with this since my japanese isn't very good but i agree with Sevalle, from my point of view there 4 elements in the game are: Fire, Lightning, Wind and Earth. I do not think there is a water element in the game at all... but my japanese isn't that good so maybe my opinion isn't well backed...
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