Final batch of v. 1.1 corrections!
* Talking with Genjimaru and Sakura when you first find out
No, I---I told him too
-- should be to
in this context - she told him to
* Throne room before fist battle with Genjimaru; I was at level 22:
Oryankur rises weakly from his bed.
-- Should there be a The
at the beginning of the sentence?
Consistency issues; Uu's entry is written in the past tense, but Yaa and Taa's are in the present tense. Suggested corrections in parentheses.
[Yaap] Nicknamed Yaa. Old man always with Uu and Taa.
Handled logistics, but after Kenashkourpe is
) back to Yamayura
with Teoro and the others, but is
) killed in Kucca
Kecca's sudden attack.
[Taana-kun] Nicknamed Taa. A boy always with Uu and Yaa.
Hesitated when he spoke. Handled logistics.
After Kenashkourpe is
) defeated, goes [went] back
to Yamaura with Teoro and the others. Killed in Kucca Kecca's sudden attack
Before leaving for On Riyaak:
She takes several strands of hair and wraps it
around my pinky.
-- The hair is plural, so she wraps them
around his pinky.
Some missing Encyclopedia lines:
Karura's true name, but she has long since
(line with no text)
-- this is also in Encyclopedia 22
-- extra space after closing bracket
Archer sprite's name is Programmer Ookawamasato
- looks like two names... (unless this was intentional)