OK, I started a Fate/Stay Night fan-fic a few months ago, and I just looked it over again. I kind of like what's going on, and I'd love for other people to read it, but it has a few major problems with it. First off, it kinda messes up everything. Mainly, Shirou is completely different, and Kotomine is a little different as well. Second, it's all dialogue based. Basically, I'm really lazy and can't be arsed to describe what happens. The story is still followable, as far as I can tell at least, so it might not be much more than a stylistic choice, but would it be readable like that? And Third, me being an unoriginal bastard, it features a few cameos from other Type-Moon works...well, not so much cameos as convenient plot devices. It might just be my inner self consciousness, but would you guys want to read something like that?