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Headron's Fate/Stay Night meets Tsukihime (Spoilers) *Moved*

Posted: February 7th, 2009, 5:38 am
by Headron
Episode One ~A Fateful Ecounter~ Part 1

Shiki: So Akiha were looking for one of our relatives?

Akiha: *nods* Our Family records say he died in a huge fire in this town.

Shiki: Then why are we here if he's dead?

Akiha: Like i said before nii-san we recieved notice that he had survived and was adopted into the Emiya family. Even though he is a distant cousin he is still a part of one of the Tohno Branch families so i need to meet him and see if he can be an asset to the tohno family.

Shiki: Being head of the Tohno family must be tough, but isn't this more like a vaction especially since we brought Hisui and Kohaku?

Hisui: ... Sorry about being a bother Shiki-sama.

Shiki: I didn't say that Hisui, its just feels like were on a family outting instead of going to see a relative.

Kohaku: hehehe. So shiki-sama would rather just go see a relative than have an outting with all of us.

Shiki: Kohaku you know i didn't mean that stop giving Hisui and Akiha the wrong idea.

*After a little more arguing they find themselves in front of the Emiya household*

Shiki: Well i guess were here, i hope someone is hope.

*all of a sudden a loud voice comes from the roof*


Shiki: WHOA!

Hisui: *Hides behind Shiki*


Kohaku: Akiha-sama now is not the time to get angry especially just before were supposed to meet someone!

Akiha: your right kohaku now is not the time to get in a fight but i will teach that guy later who is the mongrel here.

*Front door opens*

Shirou: Ah sorry about that please come in we can talk over some tea.

Akiha: Thank you please lead the way.

*Tea has been served and everyone is sitting around the table*

Shirou: so who are you 4 and what brings you here?

Akiha: I am Tohno Akiha Head of the Tohno family. This is my older brother Tohno Shiki. And these two are our servent Hisui and Kohaku. And now i ask who might you be?

Shirou: ah sorry i'm Emiya Shirou, please call me Shirou.

Akiha: Well Shirou-san we came here to meet you.

Shirou: why me?

Akiha: Because you are a mem-

*Front door opens*

Sakura: Senpai I'm home!

Shirou: ah give me a moment my wife is home.

*walks to the hall talks for a few minutes and returns with sakura*

Shirou: * introduces everyone to sakura*

Sakura: Pleased to meet you i am Emiya Sakura.

Shiki: Pleasure all ours.

Kohaku: :) Shiki-sama always sweet talking the ladies.

Akiha: *glares at Shiki*

Shiki: Now Kohaku you know i'm not stop trying to get me in trouble.

Sakura: so what brings you 4 to our wonderful home?

Akiha: we came here to see Shirou-san. i was looking through some of our records and it shows tha-

*door to the outside slides open*

Saber: Shirou you late for sword practice.

Shirou: um Saber we have guests. *points over towards the tohno family*

Saber: :oops: Oh sorry pleasure to meet you i'm saber.

*introductions are made once again and the conversation continues*

Akiha: like i was saying i was looking through our records and this shows that shirou is par-

*Front door opens once again, and rin walks into the room*

Rin: Shirou i'm home when dinner going to be ready?

Shirou: um Rin before you ask about dinner please introduce your self to our guests.

*Once again introductions are made*

Shiki: Akiha i think you should just get straight to the point this time.

Akiha: Agreed. Shirou you are ou-

*all of a sudden the front door is rushed open than slammed shut, then running is heard from the hall*

Ilya: Nii-san i'm home!!! *Tackle-hugs shirou*

Shirou: Ilya stop embarrassing me in front of our guests.

Ilya: guests? *looks around the room* oh sorry let me introduce myself i'm Illyasviel von Einzbern, please call me Ilya.

*For the fifth time introductions are made*

Akiha: ok shirou straight to the point your our cousin.

Ilya,Shirou,Saber,Sakura&Rin: :shock:


Posted: February 7th, 2009, 5:45 am
by Kikuchi
I think you should use the fanfic section for this... :wink:

Re: Headron's Fate/Stay Night meets Tsukihime (Spoilers)

Posted: February 7th, 2009, 5:50 am
by G.forge
This is the most poorly written fanfiction I've seen in a long time, but I'll admit.
You seriously had me laughing right here.

I'm hiding the following because it contains negative feedback. Read it if you so desire.
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Posted: February 7th, 2009, 5:55 am
by NonExistence
but then again, you have type-moon complex (one of THE best doujins i have EVER read in my entire life), in which everyone is still together. even
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it's fanfic. by definition, it doesn't have to be completely canon. as long as it draws from certain aspects of the original, we just turn a blind eye to the other parts.

Re: Headron's Fate/Stay Night meets Tsukihime (Spoilers)

Posted: February 7th, 2009, 6:02 am
by Kikuchi
@G.forge: In his fanfic, Shirou has 4 wives. 8) (3 heroines + Ilya)

Posted: February 7th, 2009, 6:02 am
by Headron
Kikuchi - didn't realize there was a fan fiction section i'll move this over to there here in a min. i really need to look around this website more.

G.forge - first some of my obscure reference for gilgamesh come from my work on this topic: viewtopic.php?t=2622&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0 Seconed i thought it would be more entertaining to have the full cast available instead of working off the true endings. but hey thanks for the feed back i'll start working on getting rid of inconsistanceis in the next part, i'll include alot of explanations for all of this when shirou begins to explain everything about the house and the strange people taht live in it.

Edit: on seconed thought i'll leave this here for now but i'll most likly be switching this over in the next day or two.

Posted: February 7th, 2009, 6:17 am
by Headron