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Fate Stay Portraits

Unread postby Incognito » December 7th, 2008, 10:32 am

Here's the sequel to my Zero thread.

The first batch.

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I took some of the suggestions from the last thread into consideration, i rounded Saber's face a little.

Hope you guys like it.
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Unread postby Raitei » December 7th, 2008, 10:49 am

greato. :D
one recommendation for saber, though : try to make her face a bit slimmer and shorten her nose and lips a bit. (the lip's a bit too wide btw)

also, gil's face is a bit too long. :wink:
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Unread postby xthr » December 7th, 2008, 11:20 am

nice ones incog. I especially like Gil (the face is a BIT too long, but it captures his characteristics just fine) and lancer (looks GAReat!)

Kotomine tho, I think his expression is a bit... off for him :p. He was always quite stoic in the game, and i think his expression shows a bit too much emotion. You might want to increase the iris sizes for some of these portraits. It might help get closer to what you want to portray (altho, I don't usually take my own advice XD).

For saber, i think the head shape is fine. Just the iris could be bigger, and the mouth smaller. Probably another expression mismatch, as she is some what of a calm character.
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Unread postby Incognito » December 12th, 2008, 4:01 am

xthr: sadly I've never been one to draw eyes that are too large, so i guess this is where my style and fate clash the most. That's actually archer, lancer is in this one.lol
You're completely right about Kotomine, i was probably thinking about the very few times he actually let out an angry face.

Raitei: I've actually made the mouth modifications in PS, you're right it does look a lot better.

Here's the second batch

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I was going include riders chains, but i was already having trouble with her pose so i decided to wrap it up in the end.

Hope you guys like it.
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Unread postby nanaya_shinya » December 12th, 2008, 6:04 am

RiderRiderRiderRiderRiderRiderRiderRiderRiderRiderRider!!

Btw, Kotomine looks like Nero Chaos. :lol:
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Unread postby xthr » December 12th, 2008, 7:28 am

Incognito wrote:xthr: sadly I've never been one to draw eyes that are too large, so i guess this is where my style and fate clash the most. That's actually archer, lancer is in this one.lol
You're completely right about Kotomine, i was probably thinking about the very few times he actually let out an angry face.

Raitei: I've actually made the mouth modifications in PS, you're right it does look a lot better.

Here's the second batch

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I was going include riders chains, but i was already having trouble with her pose so i decided to wrap it up in the end.

Hope you guys like it.


Lol I totally get ya man. I don't actually like making overtly large eyes very much in my own art, but in fanart, I generally go with the style of the thing I'm drawing. Anyways, I _love_ yer berserker. It really has the feel of him. Sorta like a insane gorilla lol. I also like rider's hand, it looks vey nice, perspective-wise. Anyways, do you use references when you draw? They look really nice, I personally can't really get extremely accurate anatomy without using some kind of reference (I can sometimes bs it tho :\).

Everything looks really meticulous. My sketches look like chicken scratch unless I ink it lol. :\
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Unread postby solopy567 » December 14th, 2008, 1:18 pm

The style you drew it looks a lot like Ghost in the Shell.. Saber looks kind of..awkward
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Unread postby Incognito » December 17th, 2008, 9:20 am

xthr wrote:
xthr wrote:
Incognito wrote:xthr: sadly I've never been one to draw eyes that are too large, so i guess this is where my style and fate clash the most. That's actually archer, lancer is in this one.lol
You're completely right about Kotomine, i was probably thinking about the very few times he actually let out an angry face.

Raitei: I've actually made the mouth modifications in PS, you're right it does look a lot better.

Here's the second batch

Image

I was going include riders chains, but i was already having trouble with her pose so i decided to wrap it up in the end.

Hope you guys like it.


Lol I totally get ya man. I don't actually like making overtly large eyes very much in my own art, but in fanart, I generally go with the style of the thing I'm drawing. Anyways, I _love_ yer berserker. It really has the feel of him. Sorta like a insane gorilla lol. I also like rider's hand, it looks vey nice, perspective-wise. Anyways, do you use references when you draw? They look really nice, I personally can't really get extremely accurate anatomy without using some kind of reference (I can sometimes bs it tho :\).

Everything looks really meticulous. My sketches look like chicken scratch unless I ink it lol. :\


Well every artist needs or should use reference, i tend to look at my left hand while drawing, move it around to get some of the angels. Anatomy wise, i use to practice it a lot in sketch books so i could get the hang of it. I find myself looking back into my older works to see how i drew certain areas of the body, usually the back, and sometimes the hips.

I'm also glad you guys like these, i have one more batch left.
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Unread postby Incognito » December 23rd, 2008, 1:38 am

The last set of of fate portraits.

That's right Avenger without tattoos! because they would take way too long to draw.

Hope you guys enjoyed these.

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Unread postby VoidAvesta » December 24th, 2008, 3:33 am

those pics have a awkward yet cool and personal style to them, Avenger's eyes aren't black tho.
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Unread postby Incognito » December 24th, 2008, 4:31 am

VoidAvesta wrote:those pics have a awkward yet cool and personal style to them, Avenger's eyes aren't black tho.


I know about his eyes, ^_^ i tried to add something different to make him look just a little sinister.

I think i'll always have problems translating type moon characters with my style, but i'm glad you like them.
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Unread postby RandyFlynn » January 10th, 2009, 10:00 am

Incognito wrote:The last set of of fate portraits.

That's right Avenger without tattoos! because they would take way too long to draw.

Hope you guys enjoyed these.

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Heck if I did! I just love the Spawn-ish feeling you gave to Assassin ^_^
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Unread postby zweiterversuch » January 10th, 2009, 10:07 am

those drawings are so freaking awesome!!!


I really liked that archer up there.

Really good!

Saber with her cape:

epic!

Berserker:

nice!!

caster:

magical lirical mystical!!!
(in other words: nice)
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