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Creator's cruelty.

Unread postby zweiterversuch » June 23rd, 2008, 9:26 pm

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Unread postby abscess » June 23rd, 2008, 10:35 pm

My best guess is Kohaku's daughter. Not necessarily with Shiki, but he's mentioned as someone "who lived centuries ago", though that would be quite a leap of time.... how could Kohaku's daughter live for even a century (100 years)?
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Unread postby zweiterversuch » June 23rd, 2008, 10:41 pm

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Re: Creator's cruelty.

Unread postby abscess » June 23rd, 2008, 10:49 pm

Hmmm.... I see..... hahahahaha!! It's quite obvious once you re-read it!
Born without help of seed or nest I hear the rusty sound of my joints when I sqeeze my hand.

A machine, who was built rather than being born and grow up, getting rusty for lack of care.
My name isn't special or even my own.

All the more obvious. Her name isn't her's but Hisui's, but with a nice mech wording before.

But from what I understand, she got some degree of self-consciousness, but I don't get the reason why there are crying kids outside a window if the mansion apparently has been abandoned a long time ago.
"I settled for that shriek. Those dull vacant eyes... oiled cabbage stench of her...! [...] You know what? I'm sorry if I'm not gonna do this the way you want me to or the way you might. But I will not make an angel out of someone who wasn't an angel...!" -Chief Tyrol, on his beloved wife.
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Re: Creator's cruelty.

Unread postby zweiterversuch » June 23rd, 2008, 11:59 pm

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Unread postby DarkRedSky » June 24th, 2008, 12:46 am

What you wrote is pretty cool... yeah I like it.
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