I actually thought abscess was serious for a moment.
That's what I tried to do! yay for me!
The words grotesque, membranes, member, foaming (FOAMING), and blood-congested are all used within 3 horrible sentences. This cannot be allowed to continue.
That part completely killed that scene for me. It's just... ugh.
And the "ejaculating my organs" WTF?!
Oh yeah! How could I forget those! I was perplexed for a minute with that one!
FSN H-scenes are sure full of mood-killers. Not only in the H-scenes, but also in ArchervsShirou scene in UBW. I'll quote the scene:
The impact breaks one of the arm and the leg. My sense of pain hasn't been numbed.
I use my fury to clamp down the pain that almost makes me wet my pants.
I don't have enough water. I can't release excess things.
was all I could say.... What a way to kill the moment....
"I settled for that shriek. Those dull vacant eyes... oiled cabbage stench of her...! [...] You know what? I'm sorry if I'm not gonna do this the way you want me to or the way you might. But I will not make an angel out of someone who wasn't an angel...!" -Chief Tyrol, on his beloved wife.
Have you heard about the saying that goes something like "drunk people and kids tell no lies"? Well, that's just a fallacy.