F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]

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Unread post by Echoman » February 7th, 2009, 6:21 am

Quoting from the other topic (which I accidentally bumped before realizing it was the wrong one and deleted my post) but
james-skarz wrote:Its meant to be either, MM just uses hercules bcos its more common than heracles. remember:they mod for the general public, meaning non-versed in greek mythology too :P. but yeh Heracles and Hercules are the same. no typo. and im pretty sure rin says 'heracles, otherwise known as hercules' or sumthing.

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Well she says "strongest hero of Greek mythology" Heracles is the Greek spelling. Hercules is the Roman equivalent. So yar, Heracles would be more appropriate imo (and if you have the voices on, you can hear that is what they are actually saying) I dunno, it just kind of bugged me to keep reading "Hercules" just a minor thing though...

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Unread post by Oddity473 » February 16th, 2009, 9:53 am

7th-day: Noon - the daughter of winter-Ilya(I)

It's fine, I'm only going to the shopping district nearby. There's no one who would attack me in the daytime, and we'd rather stand out if you were with me.

I'd suggest the words only or probably instead of rather (because rather really doesn't fit).

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Unread post by Mkilbride » February 16th, 2009, 5:00 pm

Oddity473 wrote:7th-day: Noon - the daughter of winter-Ilya(I)

It's fine, I'm only going to the shopping district nearby. There's no one who would attack me in the daytime, and we'd rather stand out if you were with me.

I'd suggest the words only or probably instead of rather (because rather really doesn't fit).
It doesn't? Looks like it does to me.

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Unread post by sabata2 » February 17th, 2009, 6:25 am

Not sure if it's been posted before but

Day 15 - Unlimited Blade Works - Dawn-Einzbern Castle - "VS"

"Rare swords that a legendary craftsman made at the price of his wife."

Don't we want an L there instead of a W?

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Unread post by Kikuchi » February 17th, 2009, 6:28 am

sabata2 wrote:Not sure if it's been posted before but

Day 15 - Unlimited Blade Works - Dawn-Einzbern Castle - "VS"

"Rare swords that a legendary craftsman made at the price of his wife."

Don't we want an L there instead of a W?
That is correct as it is; it's referring to Gan Jiang's (the blacksmith who forged Kansho&Bakuya) sacrifice of his love: his wife Mo Xie.
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Unread post by nanaya_shinya » February 24th, 2009, 5:46 am

Fate route
Intermission - "Demonic Sword" -VS Assassin 2

"If this place were a bit wider, I could have added the vertical slash as well."

should be horizontal

and

"To compensate for that, there should be a third vertical attack, to prevent the opponent from dodging sideways."

should be horizontal
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Unread post by Nintendo Maniac 64 » March 1st, 2009, 6:18 am

I have quite a large collection of typos and grammar errors saved, so I won't be able to share those yet until I organize them and finish Heaven's Feel.

But speaking of Heaven's Feel, I noticed that many times Ilya's full name is incorrectly spelled as Ilyasviel with only one L. This includes the scene where
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Unread post by sabata2 » March 14th, 2009, 8:06 am

Heavens feel

11th Day: Breakfast - Bad news
"......"
Breakfast continues quietly.
The only loud thing is the TV Tohsaka turned on,
offfering many topics of information



11th Day: Morning Dojo- Lecture on Magic (Drastic Measure)
So for Sakura to ask me fro confirmation like this,


And there really needs to be an updated list in the first post of what's been stated already...
It's a rule to not repost problems, but when threads get long, having to read through the entire thing to just report one error makes the reporting seem not worth it.

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Unread post by Kenzu » April 15th, 2009, 8:25 am

Fate

After deciding to explain things to Sakura

5th Day: Lunchtime - Matou Sakura(III)-The anger of the great devil

I'm sorry Sakura caused you trouble."
I'm sorry I caused you trouble with Sakura."

Also "I was with Sakura" can be replaced by "at Sakura's class".

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Unread post by Nintendo Maniac 64 » April 15th, 2009, 8:32 am

5/3 UPDATE: PC's back up and running again, but now I have a new distraction - Katawa Shoujo Act 1 <_<;

EDIT: @Message ~ >_> Now you tell me. I did that for all the other ones as well, though I included the location and stuff also (example).

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These are all from Heaven's Feel (unless stated otherwise) and mostly in order from earliest day to latest. (there may be a few out of order)

MY TYPO LIST

Just a general thing, everywhere on the internet I've seen it spelled Angra Mainyu with an i, while the game has Angra Manyu without the i. Wikipedia lists it as Mainyu as well, and putting in Angra Manyu gives you some music album.

4/16 EDIT: 4th Day: Dojo-Church - Holy Grail War, the beginning
Kirei Kotomine wrote:They are just families whose members have a higher likelihood of being chosen as . Masters.
There are two spaces between "as" and "Masters" (ignore the period, I had to put something so that it'd allow two spaces and not change it to one)
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Unread post by Message » April 15th, 2009, 8:45 am

Nintendo Maniac 64 wrote:Screenshots may or may not be included depending on my motivated-ness.
Please, DON'T use screenshots to report a typo. Just tell us where it is, and enter the EXACT phrase as it appears in the game.

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Unread post by Inuyashafangirl » April 18th, 2009, 4:30 am

Hmm...I didn't see this mentioned:

Fate
10th Day: Awakening-Morning-strategy meeting

Inevitably, the fight will be an one-on-one with Saber and Rider.

Should be: a one-on-one

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Re: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]

Unread post by Kenzu » May 24th, 2009, 7:32 pm

Heaven's Feel

15th Day: Church-Outside church - Resume battle. Kotomine's help
"Why? There's no reason for you to help me."
"Why? You shouldn't have a reason to help me."

"Of course not. It is just this one time.
"It is for just this one time, of course.
or
"Of course, it is for just this one time.


15th Day
Battle in the forest: Second half - Nine Bullet Revolver

"I'm going. I'm going to defeat him, Ilya."
"I'm going out. It's okay if I defeat him, right Ilya?"

It sounds a bit like Archer that way.

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Unread post by Nintendo Maniac 64 » June 8th, 2009, 5:33 am

Alright let's see if I can garner up enough motivation this time... Luckily the idea of a non-ero patch possibly coming this summer seems to be working. I'd hate it if these weren't corrected before the next version. D:

Yet again, I'll just edit this post since I'll be doing at least one a day. IF I FAIL TO DO THIS, PM ME - I get email notification for PMs, so if you hassle me I'll get right on it :P
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MY TYPO LIST - ATTEMPT 2

These are all from Heaven's Feel in order from earliest day to latest.

I've put the list in a spoiler tag since it's getting a bit large.
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Alright, that's it! That's all of them. Now go make that non-ero patch! :P
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Re: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]

Unread post by smartazjb0y » July 23rd, 2009, 7:33 pm

Is this supposed to be I.D. as in identity/identification? If so, I'd recommend putting in periods to make it "i.d." or "I.D." for clarification.
I'm not sure of the context, but I think they might be referring to the id, in Freudian psychology, that's basically about sexual drive. Seeing as it's about Sakura, I guess it fits her condition.

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Unread post by Message » July 23rd, 2009, 8:21 pm

smartazjb0y wrote:
Is this supposed to be I.D. as in identity/identification? If so, I'd recommend putting in periods to make it "i.d." or "I.D." for clarification.
I'm not sure of the context, but I think they might be referring to the id, in Freudian psychology, that's basically about sexual drive. Seeing as it's about Sakura, I guess it fits her condition.

First post, don't know if I'm allowed to post in old topics.
Yes, you are allowed to post in old topics. You are however not allowed to discuss other people's typo reports, as you can read at the start of this thread.

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Re: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]

Unread post by lovepopp » August 6th, 2009, 8:04 am

"Bare and silver and iron. Stone for foundation and the Grand Duke of contracts. My great master Shveinorg for the ancestor. A wall for the descending winds. The four gates shall close and come out the crown. Let the three-forked road to the kingdom cycle."

Shveinorg should be Schweinorg.

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Unread post by Kenzu » August 8th, 2009, 10:28 am

Fate

Encounter - Oldest King

"Ar... cher---"
My voice is shaking.

In the voiced version Saber says it, so "Her voice is shaking."

Gilgamesh
"I have always wanted to take the sword said to be the
most powerful."

"I've always wanted to taste the power of the sword
said to be the strongest."

Saber
"---All right.
"---Very well.

Heaven's Feel

Suggestion
15th Day: Night - Goodbye, thank you

"----Wow. I..."
...She really means a lot to me.

"----Wow. To think that I...
...Hold her so dear.

Intermission - Zouken's End

The irritated voice also contains danger.
The irritated voice also contains anger.

She sees through his plan.
She saw through his plan.

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Re: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]

Unread post by Romdeau » October 6th, 2009, 7:08 am

I found a translation/editing error. I have uploaded an image here: http://img5.imageshack.us/content.php?p ... ia=mupload

This is on day 7 of the HF arc.

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Unread post by Message » October 6th, 2009, 10:26 pm

Romdeau wrote:I found a translation/editing error. I have uploaded an image here: http://img5.imageshack.us/content.php?p ... ia=mupload

This is on day 7 of the HF arc.
Please read the first post in this thread on how to make a proper report.

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