Hisui Route - Day 12 (Daydream)
My empty room.
I start to feel down staying in this for so long.
This restless room.
This room I don't remember.
In the second line, I think it should be "Staying in this room
for so long" or... something else less repetitive maybe. At least "this" seems like it should be followed by something.
Same - Day 13
"SHIKI-chan, let's play. You'll get moldy if you stay in one place like that"
Hisui is talking to Nanaya here, but the name is in caps like it's used for Tohno SHIKI. This happens again shortly after:
That's not true. Everyone wants to like you, SHIKI-chan
Finally, thereÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s a bit of an inconsistence between the dialogue in ShikiÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s memories and the conversation with Hisui. What Hisui says at the beginning several days before is "You can believe in me". WhatÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s used in ShikiÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s memories is "trust" ("No wonder you canÃ¢â‚¬â„¢t trust anyone", "you can ***** (trust) me") and later in the conversation Hisui says "believe" again. ItÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s neither grammatically nor semantically incorrect, but seeing as that specific word is given enough importance as to have it obscured like that, I thought it was worth mentioning.