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by MechR
November 19th, 2008, 5:35 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

Fate route
15th Day
stay Night (II)

When Saber pulls out Avalon against Gilgamesh:
"The greatest protection that cannot be infringed by anything not even by the five sorceries."

Needs a comma between "anything" and "not".
by MechR
November 18th, 2008, 8:51 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

Fate route
14th Day: Night: My room
What I've gained

"She wriggles to tries to free herself."

That should be and tries or to try.
by MechR
November 9th, 2008, 9:48 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

Day 15: Battle in the Forest: Second half Nine Bullet Revolver Facing Saber after beating Berserker: "...Sakura did have extraordinary amount of magical energy." That should either be an extraordinary amount , or extraordinary amounts . *** Day 15 If you choose to fight Rider using projection: "...P...
by MechR
November 8th, 2008, 11:39 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

11th Day: Intermission Distortion "And it was not her that was looking down on the other person--" And "The inverted one--the one who was misunderstood was him." These seem to have the wrong meaning in context. I think it should be: "And it was not him that was looking down" And "the one who had mis...
by MechR
November 7th, 2008, 11:29 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

Day 7, after taking Ilya shopping "The girl said this the farthest end" seems like it should be "The girl said this is the farthest end". *** Day 8, Intermission Report "It's only sucking up life force right now, but the amount is increasing by day." Seems like that should be by the day or day by da...
by MechR
November 7th, 2008, 5:17 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

6th Day: Intermission Hero's death When Lancer is preparing to jump out of the lake, there's a line that's spoken with True Assassin's voice, but not written with a mix of upper- and lower-case like normal. Is it Lancer's line even though the voice is True Assassin's? "You lost because you wouldn't ...
by MechR
November 6th, 2008, 5:02 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 46732

4th Day: Morning
Rin's treatment

After Shirou apologizes and thanks Rin, she says "Heh, if you undersand, then we'll let it slide."

P.S.: Thanks alot for the translation! :)
by MechR
April 2nd, 2008, 8:28 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: UBW Big problem
Replies: 11
Views: 2743

FYI, you don't need the 1.0 Fate patch. The 2.0 UBW patch also includes the Fate route translation. (Actually, upgrading a 1.0 install with the 2.0 patch seems to be more error-prone than a fresh 2.0 install. If all else fails, try reinstalling using just the 2.0 patch.)
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 6:42 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Rin saying goodbye to Archer:
She does not put it into words.
She looks up at the disappearing knight with flood of emotions.
Should be with a flood.
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 5:56 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

True End Epilogue:
...Well, but you'll be in a disadvantageous position because you'll be a student at the Magic Association without being a part of it.""
There's an extra double-quote at the end.
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 5:53 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

True End Epilogue:
"--I know you're not enthusiastic about going there since the Magic Association is your enemy, but the Clock Tower has proper equipments and it's really well-suited for training.
Think that should be equipment, singular.
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 5:23 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Day 16, when Archer and Rin are saying goodbye:
He body was disappearing, but he did not come to her and ask for help, and he instead watched over this battle.
That should be His.
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 2:16 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Day 15 intermission, Gilgamesh catches up with Shinji, who complains: How!? Kotomine said that even if we have the Holy Grail, we can't make it if there's no veseel ! That kid's heart is not enough. That won't turn into a Holy Grail unless we connect it to a Magic Circuit, right...!?" Should be vess...
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 1:57 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Day 15, after the Shirou vs Archer fight, when Gilgamesh is explaining how he's still around:
"That depends on how one does it. Magi make up lack of Magic Circuit with knowledge. In that regards, my Master was exceptional.
Should be regard, singular.
by MechR
March 26th, 2008, 1:53 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Re: UBW

And please do not edit your previous posts. It makes the corrections really hard to follow. Ah, sorry. I did that whenever my post was still the newest in the thread. Will stop it. Day 15, in the last phase of the Shirou vs Archer fight: The boy has absorbed his combat skills to the point where he'...
by MechR
March 25th, 2008, 9:57 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Day 13, at Ilya's castle after she's defeated: ...Well, we'll have a bed to sleep in here. If we're lucky, we might even find some magical item of Ilysviel's . That should be Ilyasviel's . Edit: Day 13, at Ilya's castle, if you choose "all right" for Lancer's proposal: "--I see, this is seriously ba...
by MechR
March 25th, 2008, 4:50 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Day 11, coming home to find Caster holding Taiga hostage, Caster explains: ...I can even use your great noble Phantasm as many times as I want. Needs capitalization. Edit: Day 12, if Shirou goes to the church, he hears a commotion in the back: I stop myself before sitting down on the chair. shelf mi...
by MechR
March 24th, 2008, 7:48 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: Fate/Stay Night ero removing patch
Replies: 140
Views: 87574

QUESTION: Does this patch use the non-H scenes from Realta Nua? If not, can it? That would be ideal.
by MechR
March 24th, 2008, 7:35 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Should that be a or an? It seems Googling for "a hindrance" returns 100 times as many results as Googling for "an hindrance". There seems to be some nouns that started with "h" which then given "an" for the article. In the prologue, there's a line "There was said to be an heirloom, this might well ...
by MechR
March 24th, 2008, 6:42 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 35804

Day 9, after ambushing Kuzuki, Shirou asks Kuzuki whether he's being controlled. Kuzuki says he didn't know Caster was draining energy from people, but:
"But Emiya. Is Caster's doings so bad?"
I think that should be are, to match the plural doings.