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by KaneDragon
May 12th, 2009, 4:08 am
Forum: General Translation Projects
Topic: Brass Restoration
Replies: 47
Views: 14802

Re: Re:

Sorry if it's like necroing, but I need some help. I pretty much finished all 4 routes (nice game overall, even if I felt like hitting the main guy sometimes for being such a moron), yet I'm missing the second cg for Minori in the cg gallery. It irritates me a little. Anyone knows how to get it? I ...
by KaneDragon
November 22nd, 2008, 2:45 am
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

Misa route, 5/13:
Old: "It a pleasure that lasts a long time
New: "It's a pleasure that lasts a long time
by KaneDragon
November 9th, 2008, 2:49 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v3.2]
Replies: 117
Views: 47476

12th day (night): "I was actually going to have you acquire projection in three days, but you worked hard and succeeded it today." >"it" needs to be removed 14th day (church) "admirable enough to come pray to the God when you are at a loss" >"the" needs to be removed 15th day (night) "She's the magu...
by KaneDragon
October 23rd, 2008, 5:19 pm
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

5/25 Old: Krien said something to her after beating him ... New: Krien said something to her after she beat him ... (Kotarou is the one beating Krien up; with the current wording, this sounds like Krien is beating some some other male) Old: Would I too ...? New: Would I, too ...? (Comma before "too...
by KaneDragon
October 21st, 2008, 12:31 am
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

5/21: Old: She's of a breed that can fight deers , boars, and even bears. New: She's of a breed that can fight deer , boars, and even bears. 5/28: Old: Maybe Mikan got a bit taller. New: Maybe if Mikan got a bit taller. (Missing an "if"? Yuuichi is talking about Mikan's prospects as a therapy dog...)
by KaneDragon
October 18th, 2008, 3:05 am
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

KaneDragon wrote:Old: It seems I picked a quarrel with you.
New: It seems I picked a fight with you.
(preference; more common form)
I mean, between "picked a quarrel" and "picked a fight", not "quarrel"/"fight" themselves. Or something.
by KaneDragon
October 18th, 2008, 3:03 am
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

It's hard to drag myself away from a visual novel... Anyway, here's the stuff that's caught my eye so far. It's a mix of grammar, personal preference, and maybe some misconceptions, but see what looks good to you. 8) [hr] 5/9: Old: so I'm assuming he doesn't want to do it with stragers . New: so I'm...
by KaneDragon
October 13th, 2008, 11:49 pm
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

Here's the other three I was saving up, then: 2-21: (capitalization of honorific?) Old: Yuu-chan! Itou- Sensei is here, right? Can you tell her she has a sick anthropoid dog coming her way? New: Yuu-chan! Itou- sensei is here, right? Can you tell her she has a sick anthropoid dog coming her way? 2-2...
by KaneDragon
October 10th, 2008, 1:49 am
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

Triple post, since you don't want post editing and I'm such a sap for the "finding Mikan" scene. 8)

Tense error or personal preference, your call.

2-21:
Original: ...but she sure is small. I'll say she's in middle school.
Fixed(?): ...but she sure is small. I'd say she's in middle school.
by KaneDragon
October 9th, 2008, 9:08 pm
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

Another tense problem. Also, the way "master" is used (like a name, as opposed to "my master" or "the master"), shouldn't it be capitalized? If so, the latter would apply to a lot of other places, too. 2-21: Original: "She promised me that she'll come back right away... but master didn't come back.....
by KaneDragon
October 9th, 2008, 3:42 pm
Forum: Wanko to Kurasou Chat
Topic: Wanko to Kurasou Typo/mistake Report Thread
Replies: 61
Views: 34585

4-23:
"You're probably right. I'm talking about what you told me the other day..."
"That's just a joke. Don't take it so seriously."

Maybe past tense would be better, here?

"That was just a joke. Don't take it so seriously."
by KaneDragon
March 24th, 2008, 1:10 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: What's YOUR Reality Marble?
Replies: 98
Views: 18127

I'm confused. Can we stop talking about futa and fail and go back to posting variations of the UBW incantation and godmodding our own reality marbles?
by KaneDragon
March 23rd, 2008, 11:17 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: Walkthrough of the fate and ub Arc
Replies: 4
Views: 1518

I used a google-translated walkthrough linked to on beastlair so I could go back and get a save slot for each Taiga Dojo in the Fate and UBW routes. Gotta catch em all! 8)
by KaneDragon
March 23rd, 2008, 10:26 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: Why do i found a route hasnt been patched in Eng yet???
Replies: 5
Views: 1553

I remember getting a little confused back when I was playing the Fate patch (for the first time? I don't remember), and stumbled upon an untranslated path by refusing the alliance with Rin. Later, while playing the UBW patch and collecting Taiga stamps, one of the ends had Taiga talking about how so...
by KaneDragon
March 23rd, 2008, 10:21 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: What's YOUR Reality Marble?
Replies: 98
Views: 18127

I am the miko of my village.
Loli is my body, and soy sauce is my blood.
I have experienced over a thousand worlds.
Unaware of death,
Nor aware of change.
Withstood hopelessness to roll many die.
Yet, these hands will never change anything.
So as I pray, "Unlimited Watanagashi Works"
by KaneDragon
March 22nd, 2008, 2:48 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 36134

In the Fate route

On the 12th day, during the fake Taiga Dojo (reached by selecting the fasting choice):
"First, we'll modify his hands into gatling guns so he won't revive from some mistake!"
should be:
"First, we'll modify his hands into Gatling guns so he won't revive from some mistake!"
by KaneDragon
March 22nd, 2008, 2:41 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: About Bad Endings
Replies: 21
Views: 4372

Is a joke. Means that your personal vision of the characters would screw up if you see the dojos due to the randomness and funny events of the lessons. But is only that, a joke warning. Not that you have a choice if you tell Saber that you're fasting, and get that fake-bad end, with the Gatling gun...
by KaneDragon
March 22nd, 2008, 1:42 am
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 36134

Status section: Caster, Details page 7:
"her magic to burn all whoattended including"

"her magic to burn all who attended including"
by KaneDragon
March 21st, 2008, 11:33 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: Favorite Scene? (Full UBW Spoiler)
Replies: 41
Views: 10664

Yeah... that H-scene was too "she's too tight. and dry. And it's RAEP TIEM!"... Really channeling Shiki there, Shirou... :roll: Lot of good scenes in UBW... 1. Ilya-Berserker intermission - Best scene, hands down. Ilya blindly crawling towards Berserker, Berserker keeping his dead body in the world ...
by KaneDragon
March 21st, 2008, 5:04 pm
Forum: Fate/stay night Chat
Topic: F/sn Typo/Grammar Mistake Report [v2.0]
Replies: 134
Views: 36134

In the Status menu, the Noble Phantasm for Emiya Archer:

"Can duplicates any weapon he has seen"

should be:

"Can duplicate any weapon he has seen"