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by iceslide
September 22nd, 2009, 12:25 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

story 4. Kinoko's Masterpiece Experimental Theater. This awakaning of mine seems to be filled with a sense of foreboding. Original: I feel slightly feverish and dizziness from my anemia might come at any moment. Proposed: I feel slightly feverish , and dizziness from my anemia might come at any mome...
by iceslide
September 19th, 2009, 6:29 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

Well, here's a short one. Story 3. Geccha 2. I'm pretty happy if the move is unblockable, homing, and combos until death. Original: Right? Then I want to get back the main topic now. Proposed: Right? Then I want to get back to the main topic now. <- Done You're holding my character sprites, right? O...
by iceslide
September 18th, 2009, 7:08 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

Resuming from where I left. Story 2. Geccha. Original: Now that the food's gone around, I would like get to the main topic. Proposed: Now that the food's gone around, I would like to get to the main topic. <- Done Original: A review meeting? It's fine , but I have nothing I need to contemplate. Prop...
by iceslide
September 16th, 2009, 6:50 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

I'm sorry to hear that. I wish you a rapid recovery. Meanwhile, I'll give you a bit more reading in this thread regarding Plus+Disc :P First of all, a thing I forgot about Tsukihime. Day 5. *- List of girls to dream with. http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4828/tsukiday5suenyo.png Original: It might...
by iceslide
September 15th, 2009, 11:42 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

One more thing... *- Eclipse: There's no wind. Original: The grass does not sway and the only thing that changes is her figure, which gets farther away. Proposed: The grass does not sway , and the only thing that changes is her figure, which gets farther away. A comma. This is it. With this I've fin...
by iceslide
September 15th, 2009, 11:23 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

*- Kohaku's True ending. Original: But, with that, it's impossible to wake me up since I was so excited last night, I couldn't get to sleep. Proposed: But, with that, it's impossible to wake me up . since I was so excited last night, I couldn't get to sleep. Becasuse Akiha is now fine by herself, an...
by iceslide
September 11th, 2009, 11:37 am
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

More things yet again. I have these reports piling up on my desktop for awhile now. Day 9, Kohaku's route. *- Morning. Come to think of it, Original: these are different pijamas then I wore last night. Proposed: these are different pijamas than I wore last night. I'm a bit confused with the "then" b...
by iceslide
August 31st, 2009, 4:05 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

Here again to give you shivers and chills down your spine. Day 1, Kohaku's route. *- Option 3: About the girl by the window. Original: An old white ribbon that the girls gave me at the very end. Proposed: An old white ribbon that the girl gave me at the very end. Day 2. *- Option 2: Go help Kohaku-s...
by iceslide
August 25th, 2009, 5:54 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

The most frequent typo in these scenes is the lack of a space after a comma, in the lines consisting of onomatopoeias. I also found "nighttime" many times. There are dictionaries with it and not "night-time", and vice versa. I'll leave it to you. Day 12. *- Hisui's (Kohaku) H-Scene. Original: "Nn---...
by iceslide
August 25th, 2009, 5:13 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime and Plus+Disc Bug Reports

As promised... *- Hisui's True Ending. That one dream, where SHIKI was violating that one doll-like girl. Original: That... is probably--- . Proposed: That... is probably--- Original: He probably also thought it was better that as few people knew about this secret as possible. Proposed: He probably ...
by iceslide
August 24th, 2009, 4:33 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

And now... Day 9, Hisui's route. *- Morning. Original: Maybe it's the aftereffects of yesterday, but I feel nauseous when I stand up. Proposed: Maybe it's the after-effects of yesterday, but I feel nauseous when I stand up. Original: I'm fine. If you let me up, I will be fine. Proposed: I'm fine. If...
by iceslide
August 18th, 2009, 6:06 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Here I am again, this time is the turn for Hisui-chan's route. Day 1, Hisui's route. *- In the way to the mansion. *- Option 2: About the cheerful girl. Original: Father has once said that they didn't have any relatives, so he took them to work as servants. Proposed: Father had once said that they d...
by iceslide
August 10th, 2009, 4:29 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Day 11, Akiha's route. *- Detached building. Original: ... Eight years ago, SHIKI's Tohno blood awakened... and he killed me. Proposed: ... Eight years ago, Tohno SHIKI's blood awakened... and he killed me. Original: I wasn't your real brother, but I still acted like it, and I caused trouble for you...
by iceslide
August 6th, 2009, 6:59 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Day 6, Akiha's route. *- Reaching school with Akiha. Original: ---Then . Original: As if remembering something, Akiha stops and turns. Proposed: ---Then , Proposed: as if remembering something, Akiha stops and turns. *- Lunch break. Original: I'm saying the sailor suit suits her so I don't want her ...
by iceslide
August 3rd, 2009, 3:26 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Here again, bugging with another route. Day 1, Akiha's route. *- Shiki bumps into Ciel when he's running to the office. Sth about the papers of him moving. Original: but there's nothing I can do about the fact that I forgot Proposed: but there's nothing I can do about the fact that I forgot . The fi...
by iceslide
July 30th, 2009, 3:53 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Still thanks Quibi for pointing that out. I always reread those kind of sentences which can lead to doubts. I usually end up discarding the typo but these just slipped in. About the And/and & company I retract what I said regarding the style. Including the N, no/N-No thing. Said that, prepare yourse...
by iceslide
July 23rd, 2009, 4:01 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

I bit more to nail this. Day 9, Ciel's route. *- At school. Before first class. Original: Just like always, he completely does not remember Senpai. Proposed: Just like always, except he completely does not remember Senpai. Proposed: Just like always, except he completely forgot about Senpai. *- Shik...
by iceslide
July 18th, 2009, 6:37 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Day 7 Ciel's route. *- At school. Shiki and Ciel skip homeroom to talk. Original: It is part of Buddhist doctrine, so I would think a Japanese would be quite familiar with it. Proposed: It is part of the Buddhist doctrine, so I would think a Japanese would be quite familiar with it. Original: Howeve...
by iceslide
July 13th, 2009, 10:07 am
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Day 6, Ciel's route. *- Before school begins, we see Ciel-senpai. "She's down at the first year hallway again---what is she doing?" We are presented with three options. If we choose: 2. No, it probably doesn't concern me so I'll just watch from here. "It sounds weird for a third-year student to drop...
by iceslide
July 9th, 2009, 7:36 pm
Forum: Tsukihime Chat
Topic: Tsukihime, Plus+Disc and AIE Bug Reports
Replies: 106
Views: 53122

Re: Tsukihime v1.2 Bug Reports

Message: Wandering through the forum I saw at the FSN typo report thread not to use screenshots. Unless said otherwise I guess I should refrain from doing so here. Back to topic, this is a tandem of doubts more than corrections. Day 5. * Morning at the Tohno mansion. Context: She said medicine, but ...